A Deepened Analysis

I think the first draft of the scene went well for Grace and I. We were able to capture the character development of Juliet. I was able to capture the childish essence a lot better this time around then the last. In order to to catch this essence, I stomped my feet and got mad in a whinny manner. This showed the immaturity that Juliet has in the first scene. I think this was something I was able to get down, the manner of Juliet in general. I was able to understand how she is supposed to act and what she is supposed to do to in capture this, like the example above. In the next few scenes, I was able to develop a more confident Juliet. I projected my voice more and lost the urgency and child like whining of Juliet in the beginning. I think Grace did a good job of capturing her character too. By talking to each other we were able to have a better character development, and understand how tot exact off each other to make sure we were getting down the analysis. Another example is that at first I relied on the nurse, but towards the end, I didn't rely on the nurse or depend on her as much as I did before.
     However, there was still somethings that I need to work on for the final draft. The secede needs to be better memorized, this way it is easier to find places for movements. When my nose is in the script it often becomes hard for me to forget when actions are supposed to occur. Not only that, but some emotions are lost along the way, because I stumble over some words. This lack of emotion, causing a lost meaning of the script. I do make facial expressions when reading the script, but the audience can't really see it when I'm looking down at the script. So, I think by looking up many issues can be resolved, and a more deeper analysis can be seen, because better emotions and actions can be put into it. Another problem I had was talking to fast, this may be due reading to much off the script. But, talking to fast, some information is lost. This is dangerous, because some of the script is already cut, so all the important information is left. By slowing down the audience will better understand what I am saying, and again it will help further the analysis.